I like the open house PSA, the other one seems too long and dry. Speed it up with some quick shots, more upbeat music and less voice over. good luck Juan On Mar 28, 2004, at 5:27 PM, Gary Fujihara wrote: > Aloha. I am working on some video PSAs for my organization, and was > hoping to get a critique from people on this list. The videos are > located here: > > http://mkooc.org/ft.html > http://mkooc.org/Openhouse.html > > Fujmon >