roflmao On Thursday, July 17, 2003, at 02:54 PM, Richard Brown wrote: > P.S. Apple's Ad had FOUR shots, with great internal suspense (and > building humor) as the camera slowly approaches the G5 through all the > debris... the following has nine shots without a hook, and suffers the > worst thing you can do in movie storytelling - SAYING it rather than > SHOWING it. Not cinematic. What's worse, it tells the audience what > to think and how to feel about what it sees. Sorry to critique > harshly. ________________ Matthew Guemple c. 646.734.6601 h. 646.742.0994 matblack at mac.com Matthew Guemple, Art Director, Men's Fitness 1 Park Avenue, 3rd Flr, New York, NY 10016 646.935.6919 matt.guemple at weiderpub.com